I need opinions and truthful but polite critiques?

Not bad at all. I love some of the imagery and the ideas you present (I must admit the pretty little vixen is a device I use often in my poetry as well.) My critiques would be the lack of punctuation, it often helps as kind of a road map to your poem to tell the reader when to breathe and when to go straight through. That would work the rhythm, too, which could really be heightened with a few tweaks. Lastly, your themes are a bit repetitive; you stay in one (admittedly poignant) place throughout the piece. You should try building upon your idea a bit. But nice work =)